tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post8997996861814531747..comments2024-03-26T11:11:13.483+05:30Comments on Cloud nine: As I Fall...Cloud Ninehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-68573845495478407842013-07-31T20:40:48.770+05:302013-07-31T20:40:48.770+05:30Really??? Thank you Me ;)Really??? Thank you Me ;)Cloud Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-73343991691501283892013-07-30T20:34:27.860+05:302013-07-30T20:34:27.860+05:30That was scary!That was scary!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08787858130049311614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-56244841309507682772013-07-30T20:33:16.526+05:302013-07-30T20:33:16.526+05:30KP! Thank you so much for the comment. Was really ...KP! Thank you so much for the comment. Was really doubtful of this story, as I think I am not that much into short fiction. Thanks a ton :) You inspire me!Cloud Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-87381670062649855712013-07-30T20:32:16.503+05:302013-07-30T20:32:16.503+05:30Welcome to my blog, Kalpana :) Thanks for the comm...Welcome to my blog, Kalpana :) Thanks for the comment :)Cloud Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-39664292644996351652013-07-30T17:40:00.321+05:302013-07-30T17:40:00.321+05:30As I was midway of the story,I thought the fall wo...As I was midway of the story,I thought the fall would be of a different nature.But in a story of this short size ,you have given an unexpected twist and perhaps an apt end to the lusty and cruel guy.It was a gripping story.KParthasarathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02189924874350906456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-64248745960568859752013-07-30T11:09:30.775+05:302013-07-30T11:09:30.775+05:30SCARY. CONGRATS.SCARY. CONGRATS.kalpana solsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459797629127380780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-85030742105688515252013-07-29T08:02:06.712+05:302013-07-29T08:02:06.712+05:30Ahhhh....sorry. The interpretation should be the l...Ahhhh....sorry. The interpretation should be the lead character is a widower who lusts after his neighbour whose husband lives abroad. He tries to seduce her when she accidentally falls and her head hits the granite countertop, dies. Her innocent son who watches her fall is now killed by the widower. But she haunts him and is instrumental in his suicide...This is the story in a nutshell :)Cloud Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-84261697705640439132013-07-29T07:59:20.826+05:302013-07-29T07:59:20.826+05:30Thanks a ton for the comment, Ramya :) Would have ...Thanks a ton for the comment, Ramya :) Would have loved more twists, but we were supposed to write a short story dear!Cloud Ninehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02382499546129406231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-46365668319173863582013-07-28T22:01:20.739+05:302013-07-28T22:01:20.739+05:30the flow of story is a bit confusing..how ever as ...the flow of story is a bit confusing..how ever as per my interpretation...the lead character of the story is falling from 14th floor. where she dreams of a pretty young woman..living by adjacent flat.thinking of her..he drowns frm the top. he is dead..am i correct. ?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5796826042765738199.post-69793244714302688122013-07-28T15:46:43.052+05:302013-07-28T15:46:43.052+05:30Got ended before it started..:(
Would have loved i...Got ended before it started..:(<br />Would have loved it if it had continued for a few more days with some twists aka;)Ramyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09223868930836098981noreply@blogger.com